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Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Commander Lukas on Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:41 pm

Lighty armed, heavily armored landing craft the Trade Federtion landing craft.







I made two of these.
C&C welcome.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Gerrard on Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:59 pm

I think this MOC has 10 pieces in total. Razz

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Garet6 on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:02 pm

I often wonder if mocs like this are posted as a joke...

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  cln-cmndo on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:06 pm

I... Probably shouldn't say anything...








I don't like it. It just doesn't look normal...

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Post  Sithassassin on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:10 pm

Gerrard wrote:I think this MOC has 10 pieces in total. Razz


I think it has 17. Wink

Its ok, nothing special. The wings are too long, but its a good idea. And why it the bottom not level, it just looks a little odd.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Commander Lukas on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:12 pm

Gerrard wrote:I think this MOC has 10 pieces in total. Razz


Seventeen to be precise. Razz
Meh, I don't like either, I made this in only, like, two mins.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Gerrard on Sun Sep 27, 2009 2:13 pm

Sithassassin wrote:
Gerrard wrote:I think this MOC has 10 pieces in total. Razz


I think it has 17. Wink

Its ok, nothing special. The wings are too long, but its a good idea. And why it the bottom not level, it just looks a little odd.


It was also meant on my part as sarcasm. Wink

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Thunder-blade on Sun Sep 27, 2009 2:55 pm

Epic Fail. This is definitely NOT Guild level. You just slapped some bricks together, with poor inspiration and zero detail.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Jedi Joe on Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:26 pm

Wow, this is possibly one of the best creations on this site. I love the detail and the overall shape on this lander. Legorev should watch out, we have a new legend in our midst! Hola Wow!

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Troopa Daisy on Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:31 pm

This really isn't that great, I'm sorry but it looks like I could build that in two minutes. Wink

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Sialboats on Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:05 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, this is possibly one of the best creations on this site. I love the detail and the overall shape on this lander. Legorev should watch out, we have a new legend in our midst! Hola Wow!


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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Ham701 on Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:00 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, this is possibly one of the best creations on this site. I love the detail and the overall shape on this lander. Legorev should watch out, we have a new legend in our midst! Hola Wow!


If I were in the guild right now, I'd sig this.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  MikeZulu on Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:16 pm

The "foot" is way too tall and... well... needs to look like more of a foot. Try using a 2x1x1 slope with it. Else the body is fine.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Gerrard on Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:41 pm

Commander Lukas wrote:
Gerrard wrote:I think this MOC has 10 pieces in total. Razz


Seventeen to be precise. Razz
Meh, I don't like either, I made this in only, like, two mins.


If you didn't like it? Why did you post it?

And don't post anything that was made in under 5 mins.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  RubbahBand on Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:47 pm

I thought mini's were supposed to have a bit more detail than that. Wink

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  80-0 on Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:27 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, this is possibly one of the best creations on this site. I love the detail and the overall shape on this lander. Legorev should watch out, we have a new legend in our midst! Hola Wow!


I laughed so hard at this post... Laughing

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Commander Lukas on Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:36 am

Could a mod move this to the WIP area? Please and thank you.

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Captain Tredge on Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:15 pm

The Computer says "NO".

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Darth Yoda on Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:24 pm

I'm really tempted to just throw this in the basket...

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Re: Mini federation landing craft.

Post  Thunder-blade on Mon Sep 28, 2009 3:11 pm

As am I...

But we should leave it here, as an example of what a MOC shouldn't look like.

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