If You Win You're Still A Rat

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Editor's Note: This is a choppy episode in my mind for a number of reasons. The first is that I edited it over a long period of time. The second is that there are parts of it I really like, and parts I really don't. I'm not taking about story here, but editing. I'm still getting back into the swing of editing photos, and it clearly shows. On the other hand, a lot of shots, unedited, are very nice, and quite a few others, edited, really make me happy. Comment as always!

Yeah, you are finally back!!! I love it! Another great comic! Great job on the Flames.

Well that was unexpected.

Great comic Zeph. The addiction continues.

It was kind of hard to read the text in the 11th picture.

But the storyline is still great! I like how a third party has been introduced to the story!

Troopa Daisy wrote:It was kind of hard to read the text in the 11th picture.

But the storyline is still great! I like how a third party has been introduced to the story!

As I've said, text is hard. White or black, and with so many black elements which swallow any text on top of them completely, I have to go for white often, which is only slightly sawllowed by little white reflections of the camera flash. I'll keep trying to work on it, thanks for bringing it up!

And there will be a hell of a lot more parties than just3 to keep track of, so get ready to pay attention .

Very interesting, I love the twist with the "hell-bringers". Great job, and like bl*c said, the addiction continues.

I didn't think the Hell-bringers would really be a twist, but if so, then okay! Thanks for the positive comments guys, keep them coming.