Phase II entry WIP.

Most of you all might recognize this creation from one I built a few days ago.

This is what I have done so far:


I am going to add a second story and maybe a 3rd. So please leave some suggestion for me. Some one did mention a droid melting pit. I am just not sure what is should look like and where I should put it. So picture would be a big help.

Thanks.

It's "Phase", not "Phrase". Title edited. -Tac

Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.

Rabid Squirrel wrote:Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.

What could it use? I know it could use something. I am just not sure.

LazerBlade wrote:

Rabid Squirrel wrote:Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.

What could it use? I know it could use something. I am just not sure.

Needs more cow bell.

And Rabid's post was a little sarcastic, do you see the bold?

What it needs is to be taller. Then it will look much better. It looks cramped and strange. Extend the wall up in the pattern you started or get rid of the inverted slopes until the top.

Honestly, it needs more....something. It's just way to simple and it is almost the same thing as waiting to be scrap metal. Which I think might makes people think you were to lazy to come up with something new.

Needs some action! Just an illusion of movement somewhere cause right now its four guys standing in a hall.

It's good for now. It still needs some point of action, like the above posts said. And just wondering, but why is the Jedi's lightsaber ignited when he's only talking to a Clone Officer?

Sergeant Macaroni wrote:It's good for now. It still needs some point of action, like the above posts said. And just wondering, but why is the Jedi's lightsaber ignited when he's only talking to a Clone Officer?

I have to agree. Also, the moc is too plain, it needs a wow factor. Maybe a bad@ss custom clone, or something that just says wow. ( )

I would start from something totally new. This makes it as if you were kind of lazy.

O.K. O.K.! This is a WIP MOC. The minfigures will be in the MOC but will not be standing in the hall. And the purple light saber is there just to give the MOC some color.

What part of the title don't you get! Phrase II<--This is sooo not a spelling error in your topic's title.



Well, all I see is Awaiting To Be Scrap Metal with a new Jedi figure.

You should make a completely new 16x16 Moc for Phase II. By completely new I mean stay away from this and anything similar.

Project is all finished!! The new title is The Force Unleashed II "Lazer's power unleashed".



I am opening up a new topic.

Looks like you won't be needing this thread anymore.