We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device
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Wow, talk about suspenseful. Great job, can't wait for more!
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This is really intense! But you also spelled severe wrong, there's an "e" at the end. 
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Ah, true. They are not severing their brain freeze, they have a bad case of it. Fair catch.
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Great work! I hope later, that we're introduced to his home planet, maybe in at least a vision. I can't wait to see how this story folds out. 


Jedi Joe- Guild Member

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One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.
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The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.
Please say what you are confused about. If you state things that vaguely I will be unable to help you.
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The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.
Your post could be a lot clearer too.
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Zepher wrote:The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.
Please say what you are confused about. If you state things that vaguely I will be unable to help you.
Sorry for making the post confusing. In the very last scene, It wasn't very clear as to what was happening. That part was a little hard to understand. It seemed like one thing, then it seemed like you were saying a completely different thing. It is kind of confusing.
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^Have no idea what you're trying to say...
Cool comic, it's very mysterious and addictive.
Cool comic, it's very mysterious and addictive.

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Nice. I really like Zepher comics and this is no different. For some reason I think the alien really is Jesus and he has come back.

Caboose- Non-Guild Member

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This is a nice comic Zeph, what a great storyteller!
I don't really get the last frame though, the one with just the white words on the grey-black background. What is that about?
I don't really get the last frame though, the one with just the white words on the grey-black background. What is that about?
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Troopa Daisy wrote:This is a nice comic Zeph, what a great storyteller!![]()
I don't really get the last frame though, the one with just the white words on the grey-black background. What is that about?
I make the titles off lines from things. Quotes from famous people, songs, books. I just give the quote as a "back page" to give what I stole from credit, and all quotes are clues or important the plot.
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Ah, I see now Zeph. Thanks for telling, that clears a lot of confusion. 

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You've never heard Hotel California before?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZAYe366im1s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZAYe366im1s
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Good song. I have heard it many times. Also great comic.
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Yes good song also, like the reference.

Caboose- Non-Guild Member

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Location: New Jersey

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Very suspenseful. It's also very realistic. It's hard to say anything bad because it is so well put. Ah well, it is Zepher we're talking about here.

The Lone Survivor- Non-Guild Member

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Great comic Zeph, it is suspensful, and you foreshadowed a little bit, about 'Green'. If I had to predict what was going to happen, he is some kind of CIA agent making sure that everthing is in order.

Alpha Beta- Non-Guild Member

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I love it Zeph! Loads of suspense! I can't wait for the next issue!
Also...You ever seen I, Robot? The thing the alien said at the end really reminded me of it.
Also...You ever seen I, Robot? The thing the alien said at the end really reminded me of it.

Master Potato- Non-Guild Member

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