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WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

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WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by cln-cmndo on Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:38 am

Well, I think the title pretty much says what I am trying to acomplish. I'll have the first version up as soon as I make a modification.

Please tell me what you think about this!
Also, If you need pics of what an Arwing looks like in the first place, just use Google Image. Smile

EDIT: SECOND version up!




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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Gerrard on Sat Nov 28, 2009 11:03 am

Ummm, the shape could use some work and why are there different colors in the front?

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Alpha on Sat Nov 28, 2009 11:05 am



Why do you have so many colors in the front? Your reference picture only shows white...

The purple/dark blue could be stretched a bit more to the front, as well. And lastly, fix the wings, because they're supposed to be white.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Nov 28, 2009 7:10 pm

I don't like the different colours at the front and the wings look weird. Wink

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by SeargentKano on Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:08 pm

So many good memories. Sad I agree that the wings and front should be white, also the blaster/cannon/things need work.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Green Tee on Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:38 pm

1. I'd say what everyone else said.
2. Thanks for reminding me of how everyday used to go by, and I still hadn't beaten Andross. I still haven't. Waaa!
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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Rook on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:22 am

Keep trying, yours way too "rainbow".

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by TheMissingPiece on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:23 am

CommanderKill wrote:1. I'd say what everyone else said.
2. Thanks for reminding me of how everyday used to go by, and I still hadn't beaten Andross. I still haven't. Waaa!
Razz


Wow, really? I beat the game when I was 10. Razz

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by cln-cmndo on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:40 am

It is a WIP. It will be more... colour coordinated in time...

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by cln-cmndo on Sun Nov 29, 2009 11:54 am

I hate to double post, but the second version is complete!

(It is still a WIP, though.)

I still can't find all the matching pieces.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:34 pm

I'm sorry, but this is just really similar to the first one, and the front is still too colourful. Wink

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Phazezorz on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:35 pm

TheMissingPiece wrote:
CommanderKill wrote:1. I'd say what everyone else said.
2. Thanks for reminding me of how everyday used to go by, and I still hadn't beaten Andross. I still haven't. Waaa!
Razz


Wow, really? I beat the game when I was 10. Razz

I beat it when I was like 6... Razz
But anyways, this thing is too plain, and doesn't fully resemble an Ar-Wing. It needs more angles, I would say, and, of course, a better color.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by TheMissingPiece on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:45 pm

Try using an X-Wing cockpit, it looks more accurate. Try sloping the area in front of the cockpit a little. And maybe get some grill pieces next to it.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Nov 29, 2009 1:44 pm

The design is really good, but like everyone else says, work on the coloring.

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by cln-cmndo on Sun Nov 29, 2009 3:04 pm

Yeah... I see what you mean about the X-wing cockpit...

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Re: WIP-Arwing (Starfox 64/adventures)

Post by CowsRTasty on Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:54 pm

as long as this is about star fox, how do u get past the second rail shooter in dragon rock?

Read this before posting again. http://www.thecabg.net/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 ADMIN --R

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