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[WIP] Crimson Thunder

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[WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:05 pm



I took apart my Warbird and my Sparrow to make this. Stay posted for updates!

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Knight on Sat Nov 21, 2009 6:22 pm

It looks good so far TB. Nice color selection as well.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommanderChaz on Sat Nov 21, 2009 6:41 pm

I would have to agree, I think it looks great so far. Can't wait until you complete it!

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by SeargentKano on Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:43 am

I like the way you wrap everything around to fit the cockpit. You should build a bunch of different armors and just attach that to which ever one you want to use. That would be awesome!

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Axel on Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:52 am

Looking pretty good, with all the SNOT work. Now you just need more controls inside the cockpit...

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Jens on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:34 am

How did I know this was a MOC by Teebs when I saw the title? Razz


Look really good so far, loving the angels.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:23 am

Looks good so far around the cockpit. I hope you'll be making a body soon! Smile Razz

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:32 pm

I have about 80% of it done. I need some ideas for the back. Will post pics soon.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Astor on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:01 pm

So far, it looks great, the only downside is that you mixed dark grey and bley.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Commander Halen on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:30 pm

Front has an excellent shap to it. The thin wings seem out of place personally.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Heady on Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:22 pm

The wings look meh. Change them.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:29 pm

The front is really cool but the back...Not so much. The wings are kinda blocky. Wink

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:25 pm

For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas! Mad Laughing

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Knight on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:50 pm

The body is looking good TB, but the wings could use some work. Maybe add some slopes to the bottom of the wings, and some guns.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:30 pm

From the look of the cockpit, it would look like a big transport or shuttle. So I think that the body should be bigger and be something like a shuttle which can be able to hold something. Also, the wings are okay for a start but you should enlarge the length of it way more. Wink Smile

Good job so far, keep it up! Smile

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:03 pm

It needs to be longer... much longer. Don't make it ugly and pudgy, try moving the wings back and making it longer.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by SeargentKano on Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:10 pm

Everything looks great! But I think the wings are very bland, and the whole thing might turn out a little stubby, so I agree with making it longer and pushing the wings back.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:04 pm

1 Million Watts Of Power wrote:For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas! Mad Laughing

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.


Yes I read that! Gosh, you say it as if I'm not even giving feedback. Kabam!

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Axel on Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:01 am

I actually disagree with the wings being out of place. In my opinion, it gives the ship what I'm calling the 'Thunder-blade'-style wings, as it's very reminiscent of his previous ships, like the SARGE, Cayman and Warbird.

Engine intakes are also looking pretty sweet.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Tac on Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:23 am

Put a minigun under the wing. Wink

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