The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Well this is the 4th installment of the comic which started out rather bad. I took alot longer on this one to make sure the spelling was correct and that the dialog was better then prior comics. The lighting is crap. The blurryness of some people was done on purpose.

Here's a tip on editing... always make it dark BEFORE you do the speech bubbles.

Thunder-blade wrote:Here's a tip on editing... always make it dark BEFORE you do the speech bubbles.

I did thats the funny thing. Any comments on stuff other then on my editing?

Getting better..style's reminding me a little of Sial....

Also, it's Rendez-vous.

Can't see much in the pictures. I likes to see my Lego.

Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling!

Phi- If you mean by all the tan I understand. Thats the color I have the most of therefore it is going to see alot of "screen time". Also the next series should it last that long will be in a more industrial area so more grays ect.

Well thats not how my mom and my spell checker told me it was spelled. D@mn my spell checker to hell.


Rook- Well as I intended it to be shot at night it would be kinda hard to have it at night while all the lego is lit up.


Troopa- I have no sad face's.

The floor is still too plain and straight.


Oh and change those rebel troopers, make some original.

Ok thanks. I am thinking of changing the arms and maybe the legs. I also want to give them different helmets but I don't have the ones I want.

Change all the rebel figures, it looks like the Alliance is fighting the Republic.

Anyways, it was a bit too dark, the text didn't really fit inside the bubbles, and the supernova was waay too small. Good job, though.

Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling!

Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.

Man on fire wrote:

Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling!

Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.

I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean by he's stoned.

Troopa Daisy wrote:

Man on fire wrote:

Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling!

Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.

I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean by he's stoned.

I mean he's drugged, under the influence, stoned.

In simple words: He's drunk.

Daisy, are you really 13?

Yes, I am Gerrard. My birthday will be next Friday (14).

Alpha- Thas where I have a problem. I want to change the figs but I don't have any torsos that I could really use. Also wouldn't it be odd to change then in the middle of a comic series?


Troopa- I too don't think you are 13...


Edit: I flipped the rebel torsos around so they are just tan. And got rid of the goggles. I also switched out the rebel leaders Saras torso with that of at-st pilot. Those are all of the changes I am going to make for now. You will rarely see the "rebel" troopers it will mostly be the clones and the rebel leaders. So just put up with it the way it is for the next 10 or so installments the next series will be better I promise.... So if you could from now on keep the comments off of the mini figs that would be awesome.

You could always say that they have recieved a shipment of new armour.

Also, you comics are definately getting better. I like this one, but theres something missing.....

Gerrard wrote:In simple words: He's drunk.

Daisy, are you really 13?

Lolno.

Stoned means you're under an influence of any drug, but not alcohol. Has nothing to do with being drunk. You may have been thinking of hammered.

Aaaactually, 'stoned' generally refers to being under the influence of cannabis/marijuana specifically.

Oh, and the comic was so-so.

really good battle scenes and good storyline but it was dark the whole way through which made it kind of dull but aside from the darkness it was really good


Please don't bump old topics, and use proper capitalization. -Knight