Episode 21: Tunnels

Season 1
Episode 21
Tunnels

I think, due to my long pause, that I owe you guys two episodes this weekend. Enjoy the first! I will get out the second on Wed. at the latest. Not a great episode, but I like it.









































Please comment!

Pretty good effects on the pics. I'm somewhat confused on the story though.

That's probaly becuase it's episode 21. Try to reread the rest of the episodes of the series, and if you're still confused, then you're like everyone else on this site. Apparently I'm bad at story-telling.

Yes, after reading the previous ones I understood it a bit more. Still somewhat confused though with the jumping here and there.

I liked almost everything. The lightsaber was too thin though, and in frame 15 you spelled 'you' 'yoiu'.

CommanderKill wrote:I liked almost everything. The lightsaber was too thin though, and in frame 15 you spelled 'you' 'yoiu'.

Both correct, but it was the first time that I'd done the lightsaber for myself, so I'm proud that I finally handled it!

Could I get more comments?

GIMP'ing's been done quite nicely, I especially like that 'blackout' effect at the end of the flashback.

I'm still following the story alright, and the sets are non-colourful, so s'all good right now.

I'm glad you got the lightsaber done yourself! I'm following the story pretty well. I can't wait for Jinja(no offense to you Zeph, your comics are good) to come and rips this to shred. That always puts a good laugh in my day. The fire was pretty well done though.

I really liked the story line and the plot. But the last four slides it got foggy (i'm assuming thats supposed to be there) but overall great job!

Please don't bump old topics, and use proper capitalization. -Knight