Submarine

Yea, makin' this bad boy barracuda look sweet. Any ideas? Keep in mind that the back is still only 10% done....



Thanks in advance,
-Dy

Mmm, much better than your other submarine (Shudders when thinking about it)...


The problem is that you leave the bottom somewhat flat, unlike the curved surface of the top.

Since the back is 10% done... Nope I got nothin'. Looks great as always DY!

[AlphA] wrote:Mmm, much better than your other submarine (Shudders when thinking about it)...


The problem is that you leave the bottom somewhat flat, unlike the curved surface of the top.

Oh, yea.

Good idea. The bottom of the front is not flat but I completely forgot about the other part....



Anything else?

Be sure to make that tail larger.

Other than that....Yeah, I'm done.

You have too many black hands.

Looks prett sweet so far, but I really got nothing, maybe have like a curve at the end?

Also, looking at the sides... you have a stupid amount of dark bley rock pieces there.

I'm simply loving those frills running down the lower aft portion of the ship. It's splendidly smooth, and I enjoy the semi-SNOT technique that angles out the edges of the ship utilizing them nifty 2->1X2 Sloped Bricks .

Get rid of those 2x1 tiles. Use slopes instead.

It's looking really good. I love the use of those black hands.
Hmm...Improvements...Well try and make the tail better. You could make the tail triangular.

The Submarine body looks great! The thing that's bugging me is that the cockpit sticks out like a sore thumb . I would add more detail inside the cockpit when your building the back up but that's just my opinion. Other wise Amazing job!

the sleek design sweeping backwards is great. However from what I can see the tail/back needs some work. Another area that looks a little off is the slopes on the side right before it swoops inwards into the minifig hands on the tube. I really like all the hands on the tube though, gives it a great look. Is this a Sep. vessel?

I was making it for a bounty hunter but I'm still open to suggestions....

Looks nice! Love the color scheme!

It's also hard to pull off stripes and checkers in the same design.

legorevolution wrote:It's also hard to pull off stripes and checkers in the same design.

Yea, I'm gunna switch it to all stripes... Thanks for the notice.