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Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

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Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:48 pm

Season 1
Episode 3
The Invasion of Inagration Part 2: Charge









































Enjoy!

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:49 pm

The blurring was too overdone. Razz

But nice Comic, can't wait for more!

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by huntmaster on Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:49 pm

Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:51 pm

huntmaster wrote:Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile


Just to help you out (since this is what Alfi's grilling you about in the C-Box) what speciaifcally do you like. Or dislike. Give some sort of real feed-back.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by huntmaster on Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:55 pm

Zepher wrote:
huntmaster wrote:Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile


Just to help you out (since this is what Alfi's grilling you about in the C-Box) what speciaifcally do you like. Or dislike. Give some sort of real feed-back.



Oh I forgot to say I like the gimp but I dislike that it's short.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:02 pm

It's not short, it's actually a little long compared to the others on CABG.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:04 pm

CT44 wrote:It's not short, it's actually a little long compared to the others on CABG.


That's a fact I was going to point out.

Most comics done by Sial are only 11-15 pages, wher mine can be 16-22.

I don't know an average of the others becuse there aren't as many of them....

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:05 pm

Mine are about 10-14.

Because I havn't gotten to the good parts yet. Razz

Anyhow, is Mace gonna see action in your Comics? Or is he gonna be a background character, with occasional hologram contacts?

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:12 pm

Mace? I think I've used him the only time he'll be seen. He can't be main, my comics aren't completely canon, but they really can't be too uncanon. Mace is doing lots of other things during the Clone Wars, e's accounted for almost the whole time. It wouldn't make sense for him to interact with my character. Lesser Jedi (Plo?) may show up at season starters or faniles... but not too much.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:18 pm

Very nice.

Good plot, and very nice battle scenes!

And I do agree with Alpha, you should use the blurring sparingly.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:21 pm

I don't plan on using it too much guys. But I see your point.

I wanted their first battle to show them in the moment, so that their back stories (and Versilles tackle) will be justified. The blurriness was to show the rubbling from the heavy Larty shots. I know it wouldn't be to heavy, but symbolism has it's place.

I'll keep it in mind from now on though. i thought it would be wierd with only one shot like that though. And if four is over using it... may have to cut it Razz

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:24 pm

What WAS the blurring for?

Was there some kinda bombing raid/air support pounding down on the city?

And are the civillians there CIS supporters, or just hostages? Shocked

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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:25 pm

Zepher wrote:I don't plan on using it too much guys. But I see your point.

I wanted their first battle to show them in the moment, so that their back stories (and Versilles tackle) will be justified. The blurriness was to show the rubbling from the heavy Larty shots. I know it wouldn't be to heavy, but symbolism has it's place.

I'll keep it in mind from now on though. i thought it would be wierd with only one shot like that though. And if four is over using it... may have to cut it Razz


You ought ta pay more attention Alf! Razz

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:27 pm

The civilains are just going along with thier lives. Currently their city is under CIS control. They don't love it, but they can't stop the CIS currently. Besides, the CIS rule isn't effecting them to much. I admit I didn't mention that... I assumed it was obvious. It was in my head Razz

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:27 pm

So, the Laarty' be taking shots at innocent people? Razz

Oh well, it was cool in the first shot, but it got a bit redundant after a while. Razz

Just a note, why does Kuplo/whatever his name was care about casualties? It's 1 frackin' trooper, I predict it's ;Clone died now feel sad please' all over again. Wink


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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:29 pm

Alpha wrote:So, the Laarty' be taking shots at innocent people? Razz Exactly. The clones are in it to win it. The Jedi (Versilles) is here to sae people. This equal future conflict!

Oh well, it was cool in the first shot, but it got a bit redundant after a while. Razz Only four shots. And it would be wierd if it was only one. Again I won't use it overly from now on Wow this thing looks

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Felix42 on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:35 pm

Awesome! I like the clones, and the GIMP. The battle was nice, too. But, why would the Jedi attack? There were people there. They could have killed them. Sweet comic!

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Jens on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:13 am

great job! The effects were really cool, I like how you added the lines onto some trans-bricks so you didn't have to gimp too much.

I love the story so far, I can already see future conflicts between the Jedi and Clone.

But one thing, remember the micro shots you always did in the first frame for every Squad 47, yeah I miss that.

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Sialboats on Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:11 am

Bra-flucking-vo, Zeph! This has to be the best one I've seen so far. The plot is straightforward and easy to follow, and the effects are definately improving! Good use of screen-shake to convey the chaos of the masses, and you're really gettin' the hang of the fire effect Wink .


Most admirable!

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:07 am

Other than the fact that I personally did not like the fire in this one... thanks! It means a lot coming from you of course, and after T-B and Alfi's tearing of it ( Razz ) I wasn't sure if it was good or not! So thanks to you and Jens!

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