Tygerb's Transport

Note this is not my MOC this is Tygerb's, he asked me to post it since he can not. He wants to know what to add and how to improve on it. He says it will be a small transport. Note mine.

tygerb wrote:

Commander Faie wrote:

Sorry for the wait.




Diffrent cockpit
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/tygerb/Artillery/dscf0086.jpg

Main colors ( the colors I have most of)
Light grey
Dark grey

Eh I don't really have much to say about it yet.... still needs some work.

Uhh...

smoothen it out a bit?

Anyways...

Firstly, the Light Gray mixed with Light Blueish Gray doesn't work.

Secondly, it needs some tiles, or some detail, it just looks like a moving pile of bricks.

Thirdly, it could have some smoothening, but he's off to a good start...

The front is good...hmm...I can see where he is trying to go with this...I've tried it before... hmmm...

Add a roof.

I added more to it I will post pics here tommorrow. I think the cargo bay is a little to high.

A whole view of the MOC would be nice.

Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls?

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls?

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls?

I agree, the control are a bit high. I like the cockpit you have posted here, not the one on the link. Good luck on the build!

Gerrard wrote:

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls?

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.

That's what she said


No really.

Anyways, I'm not really sure what you're going for and until I can find out I can't really leave much of a comment...

I will fix the controls soon. I just finished a rough draft version that I am going to modify. I will post it but I am afraid to because I might get alot of crap. Heres what happened, I ran out of dark grey so I had to use...... blue . I know light grey and blue is TB's thing but I will change it as soon as I get the right pieces. It just needs to be modified ohh and it needs engines.

Sorry for the double post but I will be posting a super update tomorrow compared to what I originally posted.

The slopes in the front are very nice!

The pics are too big, make them smaller.

darth yoda wrote:

Gerrard wrote:

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls?

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.

That's what she said


No really.

Anyways, I'm not really sure what you're going for and until I can find out I can't really leave much of a comment...

Dy, let's leave that for the Cbox.

OK, good start. I can envision the final piece already.

Take out the levers and install a computer panel, add curved and studless bricks just like you did to the front only to the back, over the cargo area, and make it easily removable so you can put the stuff in from the top. I'd also suggest making a little door of sorts, because in the world of SW not everyone has a giant humanoid there to lift off every little cargo speeder's top for ease of loading.

to much white needs more color. secondly needs detail!!!

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I don't know it looks pretty good.

Does anyone want any upadates yet?

tygerb wrote:Does anyone want any upadates yet?

Why do you ask? Do you have pictures?