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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Troopa Daisy on Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:05 pm

I think that you did a great job on the buildings! Smile

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  CloneCommandoXion on Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:06 pm

I think the buildings could have used some tiling...Or more greebs, oh and another boat would be great. Wink

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Justin Pyne on Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:26 pm

That little tree in there doesn't seem to fit, but a little flower pot or bush would be better.

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  legorevolution on Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:36 pm

You should definitely play Shipping Up To Boston by the Dropkick Murphy's if you finish the video. Great job on the scene. It's very rare that we see an American Revolutionary Era moc.

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Darth Yoda on Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:06 pm

Well, looking from the first picture the picture looks like it has too much exposure, and all those studs do look a bit tiring but then again it is a big build and the idea is great. Wink

(It would be awesome to see some small vignettes of this time period)

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  SithFilmer on Sun Nov 08, 2009 1:45 pm

Very nice! My only complaint is the building on the far left. The walls are too plain. Perhaps some windows would suffice.

Yes, that's the tavern where most of the film takes place. If I had made windows, I would've needed a huge set outside the main interior one. Does that make sense? Sorry if it doesn't.

mazz wrote:It is a nice town. Like TB said the roofing is cool. But the red school house is so so, it could use more of a birck school house look. Hope you can get it done before Thanksgiving.

Yeah, if I had the pieces to do it I would've. Thanks!

@CommanderKill and Legorev: Haha, thanks for the songs, guys! I've never heard either of those. I might use Shipping Up to Boston.

CloneCommandoXion wrote:I think the buildings could have used some tiling...Or more greebs, oh and another boat would be great. Wink

Well, this wasn't a very advanced period of time. America was still expanding, and more thought was on freedom and ideas rather than architecture and other tangible things. And adding another boat would only make the scene a lot more crowded that it needs to be. But thank you!

Sergeant Macaroni wrote:That little tree in there doesn't seem to fit, but a little flower pot or bush would be better.

Back then, they either chopped the trees down or left them as they were, I'd imagine. America was more about natural beauty, which is why I used a tree. I guess I would either get rid of the tree or keep it as it is.

Darth Yoda wrote:Well, looking from the first picture the picture looks like it has too much exposure, and all those studs do look a bit tiring but then again it is a big build and the idea is great. Wink

(It would be awesome to see some small vignettes of this time period)

Wink

Well, this is a movie set first and a MoC second. I have a lot of people and horses walking around, and I needed studs to do that. As for the exposure, I guess that was too much Photoshoppin'. Razz

Indeed! If I ever get some more time away from school I'll have to try some more.

Thanks for all the comments and critique, guys! You've got some really nice ideas, but it seems to me that most of what you guys think should be changed would work if this was set in modern times. What I considered when I was building this was the fact that this wasn't at the height of architectural genius, or to make it look like a pretty scene in terms of SNOT. I do appreciate the feedback, though! Smile

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Garet6 on Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:24 pm

That is a thing of beauty, I CANNOT WAIT to see it in action! Surprised

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Heady on Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:08 pm

I'm not so sure about the green/red. make the roofs brown, the buildings look right otherwise. Maybe a brick texture. IMO, it'd seem more accurate. Now, I'm being nitpicky because I live about 2 miles away from Boston Harbour, and there are some buildings from that era still around. Razz

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  Green Tee on Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:36 pm

Maybe use More Than a Feeling for a drama type part in the film. Otherwise, use clips from Shippin' Up to Boston. Youtube's a great place to look up songs. Razz


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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  CloneCommandoXion on Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:58 pm

CommanderKill wrote:Maybe use More Than a Feeling for a drama type part in the film. Otherwise, use clips from Shippin' Up to Boston. Youtube's a grea place to look up songs. Razz


You may want to fix that. Wink Anyways back on topic I agree about the roofs, they should be brown now that I look at it.

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Re: Boston Harbor

Post  SithFilmer on Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:10 pm

Garet6 wrote:That is a thing of beauty, I CANNOT WAIT to see it in action! Surprised

Thanks very much, Gareth! Hopefully you won't have to wait long! Smile
Heady wrote:I'm not so sure about the green/red. make the roofs brown, the buildings look right otherwise. Maybe a brick texture. IMO, it'd seem more accurate. Now, I'm being nitpicky because I live about 2 miles away from Boston Harbour, and there are some buildings from that era still around. Razz

If I had more brown I would've but as it is I used up almost every last bit on the road and one roof. And I also would've liked to do a brick texture, but I don't have the pieces for it. Ah well... Thanks for the input!
CommanderKill wrote:Maybe use More Than a Feeling for a drama type part in the film. Otherwise, use clips from Shippin' Up to Boston. Youtube's a great place to look up songs. Razz

Hmm... I'm not sure I like More Than a Feeling. If I use Shipping Up to Boston I'll probably use the version performed by the Boston Pops Orchestra, 'cause I'll be showing this is class and it's more of a serious film. I dunno.
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CloneCommandoXion wrote: I agree about the roofs, they should be brown now that I look at it.

Yup, I agree, too. =/

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