762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice.


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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Troopa Daisy wrote:That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice.![]()
I agree. I like the effects with the gunship's landing. Why don't you try to make another one?

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
I think it was good, and would love to see more of this.

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Very cool comic and the customs are great too! Can't wait to see the second part....

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I thought it was great. I like the amount of action going on. I wish I knew how to do this stuff. 
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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Definitely the new Sial.
Great job, it really looks like a comic.
Great job, it really looks like a comic.
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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Love it, just love it. The effects are amazing, and the storyline is crazy. Sweet! 


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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Wonderful. So much effects, I wonder how long that took just for one picture.
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/ditto everyone else.
I like the comicbook-esque feel you gave it, and I think you should continue.
I like the comicbook-esque feel you gave it, and I think you should continue.
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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
GREAT JOB!
The lighting really pulled everything together.
The lighting really pulled everything together.
Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
It's a bit bright and colorful, I think turning down the saturation would do. Other than that it's awesome!

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Brilliant. Just brilliant. Superb editing, nice story. I really enjoyed reading it. 

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I love this. It's very well presented, has good action, and the clones just look fantastic.
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Aki said exactly what I was going to say. 


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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
Great job!
The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.
The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.
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Alpha Beta wrote:Great job!The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.
I think it was meant to be that way. The brightness that lends to the cartoon is what gives it a nice comic book touch. Looks like a hi-gloss comic.
I think it is perfect the way it is, I wouldn't change a thing and I seldomly say that.
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Sorry, I like it better with less cartoon like colors. I never said that it wasn't a good comic, I think it is great, I would do it differently though.

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)
The superb quality of your custom clones was icing on the cake for this; I also love that electro-pulse sniper rifle. It makes me think of the Gauss Rifle from Crysis... but I digress.
Plus, the way you gave it a realistic feeling, like the Republic was actually landing on a Naboo-esque planet, was well-done.
Plus, the way you gave it a realistic feeling, like the Republic was actually landing on a Naboo-esque planet, was well-done.

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