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762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

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762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Post  MikeZulu on Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:05 pm

Just like my Banshees, this turned out to be sh*t as well, but it's done now. Don't expect a second part...









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Post  Troopa Daisy on Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:25 pm

That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice. Wink Smile

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Post  Commando 45 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:33 pm

Troopa Daisy wrote:That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice. Wink Smile

I agree. I like the effects with the gunship's landing. Why don't you try to make another one?

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Post  Hazard with a Glove on Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:42 pm

I think it was good, and would love to see more of this.

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Post  bl*c on Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:21 pm

Nice! I agree with the others you should make a sequel Smile.

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Post  Flickr Customizer on Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:51 pm

Very cool comic and the customs are great too! Can't wait to see the second part....

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Post  CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 06, 2010 4:53 pm

I thought it was great. I like the amount of action going on. I wish I knew how to do this stuff. Sad

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Post  Comrade Faie on Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:02 pm

Definitely the new Sial.

Great job, it really looks like a comic.

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Post  Man on fire on Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:10 pm

Love it, just love it. The effects are amazing, and the storyline is crazy. Sweet! Smile

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Post  gama568 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:39 pm

Wonderful. So much effects, I wonder how long that took just for one picture.

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Post  PhiMa on Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:34 pm

/ditto everyone else.

I like the comicbook-esque feel you gave it, and I think you should continue.

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Post  eclipsegrafx on Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:26 pm

GREAT JOB!

The lighting really pulled everything together.

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Post  Custom King on Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:19 pm

It's a bit bright and colorful, I think turning down the saturation would do. Other than that it's awesome!

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Post  DarthPineapple on Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:24 pm

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Superb editing, nice story. I really enjoyed reading it. Smile

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Post  -Aki- on Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:46 pm

I love this. It's very well presented, has good action, and the clones just look fantastic.

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Post  Star Warts on Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:40 am

Aki said exactly what I was going to say. Smile

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:00 am

Great job! Smile The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.

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Post  eclipsegrafx on Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:02 am

Alpha Beta wrote:Great job! Smile The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.


I think it was meant to be that way. The brightness that lends to the cartoon is what gives it a nice comic book touch. Looks like a hi-gloss comic.

I think it is perfect the way it is, I wouldn't change a thing and I seldomly say that.

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Post  Alpha Beta on Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:31 pm

Sorry, I like it better with less cartoon like colors. I never said that it wasn't a good comic, I think it is great, I would do it differently though.

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Re: 762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Post  80-0 on Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:54 pm

The superb quality of your custom clones was icing on the cake for this; I also love that electro-pulse sniper rifle. It makes me think of the Gauss Rifle from Crysis... but I digress.

Plus, the way you gave it a realistic feeling, like the Republic was actually landing on a Naboo-esque planet, was well-done.

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