289th Legion #1: "Special Operations"

foxrex101 wrote:

Pdragon wrote:

foxrex101 wrote:Dude, the eighth picture was an EPIC WIN in my opinion and also try to make the text bigger and add more of a plot to the story.

Its an EPIC FAIL in my book.


This comic isn't bad. Try to put some more action into it and make the characters less robotic...

How is that a EPIC FAIL? I have seen no one on this sight that has taken a photo behind the clones going to attack the droids.

Lolwut?

That's either the stupidest, or funniest thing I've heard today.

HE'S NOT THE FIRST ONE TO DO IT?

I know I wasn't the first one but I still don't see how that was an EPIC FAIL...


@PD-Dude, stop bashing me for every little thing! That's all you ever do to me and I'm sick of it!

Well firstly, I can see that structure is made out of paper...

And I guess a more well thought out attack would include a TAC team with atleast 6 armed Troopers, though I guess 3 SpecOps can accomplish the job, but if that were the case, why couldn't they just bombard the AA turret?

It'd be a bit more threatening if there were a couple AA turrets, and I would've split this up into 2 parts, 1 for briefing and deployment, the other for action and exfiltration.

I agree, this was not very well thought out and I was eager to get out my first comic...I'll work harder on my next one...

Well, it's OK. (Not that I'm a great comicker myself, I just started)

The first shot is a bit like mine, but I doubt you would copy me on purpose, without giving credit. The text is a bit brief, make it longer. The pictures are good quality, the sets built up pretty well, overall it's alright.

CT44 wrote:I agree, that was my favorite shot in the whole comic...

Yeah totally and yes I do agree that PD should stop bashing all the little mistakes or big mistakes and doing EPIC FAIL and stuff like that.
P.S. Not trying to be mean or anything PD. Also yes I know it sounded funny that no one on this sight that has taken a photo behind the clones going to attack the droids. I've actually seen almost every comic with clones behind the droids but I just really meant that the 8th shot was cool and I liked the position of the camera. So yeah your totally right that was freakin funny!

Hi Im new, nice comic but if that was the first in the series it was a little random.


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